by natashastevenserotica
That was a great start, especially for a first submission. Welcome to Literotica, Natasha, and thank you for this terrific story; I can barely wait to find out what happens next! Please don't make us wait too long for Part 2. Very well done -- five stars.
Well written, well thought, well done. Very erotic will never think detention is a bad thing again
You've got it. Real talent. I'm sure you know that already but I suppose it's nice to hear from someone else. You could write professionally. Maybe you already do. If you don't yet you should.