All Comments on 'Bound by the Burglar Pt. 01'

by natashastevenserotica

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 9 years ago
Wow!

That was a great start, especially for a first submission. Welcome to Literotica, Natasha, and thank you for this terrific story; I can barely wait to find out what happens next! Please don't make us wait too long for Part 2. Very well done -- five stars.

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

Very nicely done. I'll be waiting to read what comes next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wonderful

excellent thanks please post more

RogerONeilRogerONeilover 9 years ago
Hot Detention

Well written, well thought, well done. Very erotic will never think detention is a bad thing again

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
*****

You've got it. Real talent. I'm sure you know that already but I suppose it's nice to hear from someone else. You could write professionally. Maybe you already do. If you don't yet you should.

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