by jessbbaby34
If I had to guess, I'd say the relatively low rating is coming from not continuing your cliffhanger and a lack of overall sex in this chapter. Very happy that you've updated the story, can't wait for more.
If you are reading and wonder what happens next, check out her blog. It should be under her profile, and read up to the unfinished part 24. Also find out a little about this world of the Bound Friends
I’ve loved this story since I first read it, several years ago now. I’m sure I’m not alone in appreciating it for the inventive (and utterly hot) situations you’ve conjured for them, but at this point the characters have long since become more important than the heat. It’s a testament to your storytelling ability that I care as much as I do about them. That said, my heart aches for Lea and I miss her when she’s not part of the main flow of the story. Not a criticism, it’s your story after all, just my own reaction. In a story filled with great characters she’s your best one, and the could-have-been relationship between her and Andrea is easily my biggest regret. Thank you for sharing what you have, here and on your blog. Incredible work!