All Comments on 'Bound in Spirals Ch. 01'

Great story so far. I love it! See above!

Five stars, and I can't wait for more!

It's great to hear people enjoy my writing, it inspires me to write more! I hope you continue to enjoy the next parts.

I am really looking forward to more

Well presented and well written. Keep going.

I really enjoyed this chapter, I hope you continue with this story! 5 stars!

Well I can say this chapter served as a good prologue . Good to see so many characters in this early stage . Which gives me an idea that this story gonna be really long . I'm hoping to see more of the world and would like to know more about Sam in the next chapter . Keep up The good work , definitely 5 stars !!

Much cudos to you sir

I'm disappointed that I missed this when it first came out. But am very satisfied to find it now. I can easily see this story becoming one of the greats on Literotica. Bravo! Very well done!

Beautiful imagery. Awesome dialogue. Terrific beginning to world building. The action scenes were fluid and well written. Just keeping doing what you do.

Thanks for posting !!!

How the hell did I miss THIS?

. . . . done, thanks for sharing your work.

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Wow, Just wow. it really caught my attention and am eager to read more

I rarely rate anything 5 stars due to too much formulaic stories here. You get 5, hands down.

This is definitely one of the more well written stories on this website. Well done. Very immersive.