All Comments on 'Box Shaped Heart Ch. 01'

Ah Laura I am so excited that box shaped heart is finally out on lit. You know it’s my absolute favourite story of all the ones you’ve published on Patreon. I can’t wait for everyone to go on a journey with Carter.

I would just give a warning that please stick with this story, it’s honestly phenomenal but different from most you’ve probably ever read. When I started reading it on Patreon I had multiple chapters to read so please don’t give up on this story, if it seems a little out there! Laura has honesldty worked so hard on it and I’m sure everyone will love it just as much as I do ❤️

YBF Nina x

VERY INTRIGUED BY THIS STORY AND CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE. (SORRY FOR THE GIANT TEXT, KEYBOARD IS MESSED UP.) WHAT IS NOT MESSED UP IS THIS STORY. I CAN NOT WAIT TO READ MORE.

Laura has honesldty worked so hard on it and I’m sure everyone will love it just as much as I enjoy this story so please be kind😈

The idea for the story is great, very innovative. I think it would come out clearer if you changed the point of view to first person. That way you can tell the story from Carter/Alex POV. You use he said a lot which for me makes it hard to know whose speaking.

Like this story much

More please. And soon!!

‘Collateral’ was a little slow to start, well this just goes straight to “let’s start with something interesting”. Keeps your mind working to keep everyone in the right place. How fun! Can’t wait to see how things go once Aaron get’s lovey and intimate with Carter/Alex! Oh Lord, does he freak, or just go with it while his mind is screaming “OMG, HE’S TOUCHING MY DICK!” I’m already LOL at the possible scenario. Can’t wait for the next installment. Thank you. JP

Yeah right! If he is only a phobe for Aron then most likely its because he subconsciously is in love with him and got shitfaced not because Aron was gay but because Aron was getting married. 😁 I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story. I'm a major fan of Collateral, and so far I'm excited about Box Shaped Heart.

I mean how would you feel if your best friend that you've known practically all your life just randomly comes home says he's gay and that he's about to marry a man. I wouldn't to be happy either I probably act the same way because you didn't tell me nothing. As for the wedding the dude was drunk, drunk people say some stupid shit. Also I'm aware there's no punctuation in this but I'm using voice to text

Just stumbled on this today and I am absolutely LOVING THIS!! Can’t wait to see if my imagination is going in the same direction as the book!

Very interesting!! I actually think carter has right to be mad when aron announced that he was marrying a guy. I mean u dont spring up such stuff on your best friend just like that.

😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 its funny