All Comments on 'Box Shaped Heart Ch. 03'

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eros991133eros991133over 5 years ago
Great series

This is great work, laurasfox, please continue...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantastic

Hi Laura, wow I’m really enjoying this series already, it’s a lot of fun I can’t wait to read more. Are you planning on writing anymore stories after this?

Thanks from Dan

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow

Carter is in a pickle. How can he ever reconcile having sex with Aron? If Aron can just get his dick in Carter, it will blow his mind. Alex’s ass is used to that and there is nothing that compares to a dick that fits in your ass! Those fireworks are just gonna blow him away. Come on Aron, wear him down. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Thank you. JP

JP0920JP0920over 5 years ago

love this story, great writing!

laurasfoxlaurasfoxover 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you everyone!

Oh, you guys are so great! Thank you for all your kind words!

@eros991133, I will definitely continue! I have the entire story figured out.

@Dan, yes, I am planning to write more stories, actually I'm always writing, lol! The real challenge is to keep all my naughty characters in order. So you'll hear plenty of me.

@JP, oh, yes, that's what Aron must do now, and there's more to Carter getting used to than the current challenges ;) As for Alex's body being used to that kind of attention, spot on!

@JP0920, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Role reversal

Would be cool to see Carter fuck Aron. Aron is desperate, who knows what might happen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
@Dan

What Laura is too polite to mention is she has a Patreon. Currently she had collateral completed, a side story to collateral completely, box shaped heart currently has 28 chapters finished, she has a story called a good servant finished, she’s started a new story, and then there are 4 other books she’s sent all of us Patreon supporters I’m sure I’m missing something too but for $5 a month it’s a steal! She’s also so wonderful with messaging you and replying, if I could show you all the Goliath conversations I have with Laura you’d be shocked 😂

Nina x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Excellent

Well written. This chapter is both funny and sweet. Carter is in for it. Can’t wait to read more.

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