All Comments on 'Box Shaped Heart Ch. 08'

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HopelessRomantic777HopelessRomantic777over 5 years ago
I miss Carter and Aron

I hope things are getting better for Carter and Aron. Ugh i cant wait for the next chapters, author! You really know how to thrill us and anticipate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

This story intrigues me. So well written!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I really like this storyline. I feel like it’s not really moving on at the moment. There has not been a lot of happening in the last couple of chapters and I feel like they’re too short. You could probably combine some of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I pray it's not too late before Aaron finds out that Alex is Carter cause it would be damn hard to forgive your bestie friend who once ditched you and also betrayed you.

Carter should just come clean. sometimes I hope Aaron is a bottom forced to top cause Alex is a bottom. Maybe Carter could top

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Slow circles

I liked the way this story started, but it’s moving in very slow circles. Nothing really new is happening to hold our interest.

laurasfoxlaurasfoxover 5 years agoAuthor
@everyone

Many thanks to those of you still keeping up with the story. I see there are some concerns, so I need to say something.

The story will go places, but it will do so at a slow pace. I will try to post more often, but I don't see how that can work too well if I just upload chapters that remain in pending. I hope at least to have one posted every week, but that's not entirely up to me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
So Good

I just love this story. Not too slow for me. Carter’s experiments with sucking cock were hilarious.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This story is hilarious. Keep up the good work thank you!

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