All Comments on 'Horny Sister'

What was with Ed not ejaculating any sperm when he came!? It would have been nice if you would have explained that situation.

We all live in a capital "I" - in the middle of the desert, in the middle of the sky.

The title "Boyfriend and his slutty sister" makes no sense at all in the English language.

Perhaps, you mean Brother instead of Boyfriend?

Give that sexy Ed a bit of chest hair for his muscular chest -- it will make him even more sexy than he already is!

Really liked the dynamic of their relationship. Keep writing.

No sperm? No knocking up? BS

Stopped reading after the fifth sentence. Made no sense.

Loved it, amazing and sexy, needs CH2

Story ran well.

Brother sister deserve each other.

Hope Anna finds some deserving of her. She is the victim in this woeful tale of bitch siblings.

Not sure why he is in the apartment and not at home just going to high school. Seems weird.

Please, no more chapters. Can only take so much of the crap pair.

Let me start by saying you are a great writer! I enjoyed your first story very much! This story; however, even though well written, I just didn't like, but it has nothing to do with you as an author, its just because I am not into incest like that. If she was his stepsister, than that would be a completely different story and I would have loved it. Some advice for next time. Cheating on your girlfriend while talking on the phone is very hot, so maybe next time you could have played out that scene rather than just hanging up and then getting it on. Also, if you are not planning on continuing a story then a resolution to the story would be great such as the girlfriend catching the boyfriend cheating, "nice" conclusion for everyone. But great writing! Keep it up! Maybe next time, less incest. Maybe, girlfriend's best friend, wife's best friend, wife's sister, daughter's friend, daughter's teacher, secretary, coworker, maid of honor. There are so many possibilities. Keep it up!

Dry orgasms for him? Unless it's medical I call Bullshit! These two siblings deserve each other, Bitch and her Bastard!

The dry thing ruined it after the first time. I can see the first one as a hook. But every time I read it after that, I just felt the asshole brother was going to get testicular cancer from semen backup syndrome. And that asshole slutty sister would have loved throat full. OR a face full or an ass full. The other thing that was missing was a little dom piece with the sister controlling the girlfriend. Anna is so submissive she would have cleaned up asshole sisters creampies just to keep the boyfriend.

Overall, the story was extremely good. Hot descriptions, dialogue, and a very well written seduction. I do agree that the “dry ejaculation” thing was a mistake- much better to just give him unrealistic stamina. But other than that, it was well done, and I look forward to more.

Just like GOT Jamie Lannister

You are going to continue this story, right?

wow, they way you let me feel the story, wonderful....