All Comments on 'Boyfriend Material Ch. 02'

Thanks! Another great one -- I'm intrigued as to where you take this

Superb. Your development of all three characters is perfect. Malcolm’s irresistible arrogance, Kelly’s susceptibility to his nonetheless commanding appeal, and her inability to resist satisfying his curiosity as well as his lust, and Rory’s headlong if unwitting plunge into cuckoldry, they all hit the spot for me precisely. Two things stand out for me especially. First, your description of Kelly’s sensations as she lies under the rutting Malcolm, her legs open to him, his cock deep inside her, his weight bearing down on her, his semen pumping into her. Divine. And second, your description of Rory’s mastubatory reflections on girls of his acquaintance. It is as if you had read my 18 year old mind. His delicate refusal to think of the girls he admires, his eagerness to think of the girl who cheated on him as she gives herself to another man. That was me precisely, and your description of them made me realise how much my stag/cuck impulses were there from the very start. Bravo

Amazing buildup. The payoff is going to be intense.

Auspicious beginnings :) Good luck with future installments. I will look forward to them. 5 stars

Can't wait for more chapters, keep up the good work!

I enjoy when a woman like Kelly wrestles with her conflicts. Her heart needs a nice guy like Rory, but her pussy and her dark psyche crave the shameful abuse that only someone like Malcolm can provide her. More, please.