by satisfiedsissy
Nicely written.
We DEFINITELY need to hear more from Harriet. :)
This was seriously sexy -- I got way harder than for other more or less similar stories (boy gets persuaded to be female date of male prom-goer). I think I especially liked that Harry got seduced by someone who wasn 't even his date.
Good description, I felt as if I was there watching. Well done!
the edge of cleverness meets the deep well of undiscovered lust. You captured that quite nicely. Of course you know that there has to be more. Just as Harry could not have predicted what would happen, and plunged headlong into the experience, so you are now careening down the path of a story-line. Please take the next steps so we can find out what happens next (The Head surely knows).
i like this story and the writing was very good, a little slow in the middle and wish it would have gone a little further with the two primaries. All in all a good read , i want to read more from satisfiedsissy.
I have really enjoyed this first chapter and will have to go straight to the second part now . Thank you kindly for sharing your delicious thoughts with us all.