by Jackie.Hikaru
Just a fantastic story and extremely well written! I do hope you continue the story.
I'm not sure if you intended this story to be part of a series, but I NEED to find out what happens WHEN River reunites with Emma in Tacoma.
I'm not too proud to beg, so PLEASE grace us with a sequel. This CAN'T be the end. The rest of River and Emma's story MUST be told.
Delightful Western Love Saga!!
I am a solid fan of Western Novels, both "Action & Romance". I thought Bozeman By Christmas was a quite nice Storyline and well written. Emma / River were two very likeable characters, although with quite different mannerisms & cultural backgrounds.
I rated the story "Definitely 5*-Stars" and would certainly enjoy a Ch, 02🎉, with their meeting in Tacoma!!!!
Very well written, a great story, that I sense is not quite finished. We need to see what happens when Emma and River meet again. Will Emma go with River to Hong Kong? Will Emma ever practice Law? Cam River and Emma ever live openly somewhere in the world?
Thank you, such a wonderful Christmas story.
Thanks for the nice comments everyone! I'll for sure start working a new story for Emma and River! Their adventure isn't over yet ;)
Great story, I live in Montana and drive by Livingston and Bozeman on a weekly basis. Never look at it the same again .
And left open for a subsequent chapter. Fully deserves the rating.
I just loved this wonderfully nuanced and delicious, delightful story. We really do need to see the next chapter....
I really hope she doesn't have to choose! Could you possibly created a poly/non monogamous situation? I always feel annoyed in straight lit when the characters have to choose only one, it's so dissapionting. I love your writing style, do you publish on other sites/spaces?
Unquestionably 5 stars from me. I ache for them not to be together but Emma will be faced with an uncertain direction. Either would be a worthy choice for her but whomever she chooses it will be painful. I am leaning toward Emma with River. I think that doubt would haunt her if she chose Percy. Would she ever feel any relief without River? She would always weigh that choice with what River awakened in her. She would more likely feel trapped with Percy in a patterned life. River would always be to her freedom and adventure. Would you exchange a walk on part in a war to a lead role in a cage? My apologies to David Gilmore.
This was a great story and it was left at a point where the reader is able to choose the fate their heart seems fit.
I can see Emma and River strolling through Hong Kong both glowing and at peace with the world.
A lovely quirky story. You really conjured up the wildness of the storm and the woman. I love the `old world' feel to the story and the passion. Nice way to end it, with thoughts of the pair in Hong Kong, or maybe Em writing her book for her.... Thanks.
Smile ........how sweet how lovely how enchanting ........ A marvelous story wonderfully written and leaving much for the immagination about a upcomming future
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You do have a gift of writing complex love stories. I only wish there was another chapter - or two, or three, or ...
that brought closure to this lovely tale.
Wow! I'm tongue-tied.
In my epilogue, River does "call" on her. And, of course, they do set off on their world adventure beginning in Hong Kong.
But, as a writer, I wonder if that's far too simple an epilogue to write.
But what if River showed up ten years later, after Emma was married, and Percy died in a railway accident? Now, *that* might worth writing!
Wonderfully written. Loved how they fell in love and made love, especially tribbing :) Please add more!!
Wonderful story, wonderful characters, wonderful writing -- clear and beautiful. Hope Emma goes to Hong Kong.
What a great story. So well written. So good I am going to explore your other stories. X
You know, I liked this story and I even liked the "cliffhanger". Did she see River again? Maybe or maybe not. Did she go to HongKong? Again, maybe or maybe not. Fill in the blanks as you wish. It was a great story and well done. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Thanks for sharing.