All Comments on 'Brad and Hatty'

Loved it. Wish it were longer.

You must be using a spell-check routine that automatically corrects words. The trouble with that is that it changes to words that are not intended.

Get yourself someone to proofread your work, please.

Your stories are too good to have them messed up with miss-used words.

There is a lot of room for expansion in this story, please consider the possibilities and don't wait too long to write more!

There's no real story arc but Momstheboss captured some heated moments, memorable dialogue with snippets of unusual dialect . Sexual scenes ranged from poignant with ill mom and far more vibrant Hatty . I'll never understand why comments harp on punctuation . This author has a unique voice and eye for the gritty but backhandedly sweet, taboo trysts. Well played overall .

Full marks ** * * *

"Bad" just about covers it, but I still want my five minutes back!

"he reframed from touching her" Was it a nice teak frame? Maybe pine?

And is she Hatty or Haddy? Make up your mind!