by xander1219
I gave you 5 stars and did enjoy your first story, but thinking it might be in the wrong category?
But then maybe I'm wrong, because your future parts will make your story fit this category after all. I will be patent and watch.
I will be following you in hopes it does come back to this category.
Either way, it was a well written story that I enjoyed, and I look forward to reading the rest of it.
Thanks for your writings and sharing it with us.
A good start but reader do not like short stories that stop when they've getting to a good point
1 Star