by SpotInTheSand
Seriously! If she is who you're hinting at this is the greatest setup chapter on this site. If it isn't then you are the worst person in the world
Please don't make me wait another 4 months (or more) for the next and keep us readers appraised of your progress. If only to heighten the anticipation.
mmmmm, interesting statement..... i wonder??
Good chapter with two female characters both of whom are after more than just a quick roll in the hay.
Already looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for keeping this story going through all these years.
Just when I thought the story would wind down it gets even hotter with an Aussie. And that was an amazing turn when Brad held back. It makes the character that much more real. Can't wait for the next!
Damn - I wish there was a way to tick a 6th Star!
I think I know what is going to happen, still can't wait to see the next part, this is one of my favorite story on wholee literotica, I can't tell how udesperately I have been waiting to get to the end.
What a road block...a real show stopper! Until the next chapter as I impatiently wait!
How can you make sun screen so fucking hot. Im a little nervous to see how this ends up, but i love all the twists and turns. Awesome writing, man!
Way to leave us hanging again. You keep wiring we'll keep reading
For a moment I thought you had found a way to pull this off, when she was unable to order. Too bad. Still, while this seriously detracts from the story, it's still a nice read, even if it the ending came two chapters too early.
Well, I read though from the previous revelation until he caught up; I expect I'll read the rest to see how he gets there this time as well.
Ah the final challenge, how do you love two women, apparently equally, at the same time? I've wondered that too but they weren't loved equally. I look forward to reading your take on this dilemma. I appreciate your and your Muse's creative imaginations and wordsmith abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your sexy vision and literary talents.