All Comments on 'Brad's Treehouse'

Be careful you don't knock her up!

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Someone is going to get pregnant again.

How long before he plants his seed in the same garden the young stud planted his seed? Please describe her pussy after he fills it with seed. And what her pussy looks when she comes into heat.

I hope he can deal with her bringing other guys to his treehouse. She is always horny. He can babysit when she is getting laid.

a small pet peeve what color were her eyes , either way amazing story freind:)

needs another chapter

I think this needs at least one more chapter. Good story!

This story was very well written. One of the best I've ever seen on this sight. Thank you.

Good story, but you need to add a bit of romance and affection in chapter 2

We need another chapter or something this is too good!!

These mysterious women that go into essentially 'foster care' rather than just go to the drug store after they letter their inner skank out. It's not 1898 anymore.

The interaction between Page and the police was a little terse, it could have been expanded a bit. I loved the rest.

The word you were reaching for is 'beckoned'.

Not 'beaconed'.

The word you were reaching for was 'arrangement'.

'Arraignment' is what is waiting for Carl, in front of a judge, to make a formal determination of charges he will face.

This needs a sequel.