All Comments on 'Brain Development Enterprises Ch. 01'

J'ai hâte de savoir la suite ! J'adore !

Absolutely love your story. This is the first I read, can’t wait to see more of your work. Just started writing myself, it’s inspiring to read others like yours

Keep going

A Classic inspiration very well written as always.

Another great start coming out with this.

You've taken a generic-free-Internet-smut plot and made it good. I'm impressed.

I haven't read all your stories yet, but I've liked if not loved those that I have. This one is my favorite at the moment. You simply have this knack, no, sorry, I mean unique talent, to write a story with a perfect balance of erotica and substance that keeps the reader entertained, turned on and thirsty for more. I hope you keep writing and I can't wait to read your next story, though I'm anxious to see the next chapter to this one.

I am looking forward to Mommy coming home. Hopefully she will be supportive of her daughters new behavior.

Looking forward to what he learns in lesson 2

More please

Excellent!

Pretty good but a little corny at first.

But well written, and I did enjoy it. I will read the rest, eagerly (but perhaps futilely) waiting how it will backfire and what he will do then (logic says, no one sells mind control products just for the front price of it). Anyhow, you got my 5* for this.

This is the 2nd read

You can help me...

Hey! It's JC, and I'm here to ask for your professional support.

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If each person who read all the way through one of my novels paid $3-6 (about the price of a bag of potato chips, and less than half the cost of a paperback book) then I would be able to continue writing indefinitely. As it is, my current trajectory will have me drastically cutting down on my writing volume within the next 6 months.

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With much love,

JC

I love how well thought out your plots are, your grammar, the character development, the story and just the right amount of sexuality. This first chapter might have made this my new favorite book of yours, I'm so intrigued. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Have to say extremely well done, you are very much appreciated. Thank you.

Damn! This is one amazingly hot story. If a guy doesn't get turned on by this story, he is dead. This is the first story of yours that I have read and even though it's going to be damn' hard to top this, I am going to read the rest. I am definitely a new fan. 5 Stars from me.

favorite kind of story

Interesting start

Brilliant start

Great story, very well written.

Great start and I can barely wait to read more.

Damn that's hot. She turned very quickly into his submissive little slut. Would have been hotter still if she had a nice little cherry to pop but alas many authors overlook this. I hope that the wife really was just working late and isn't "working late" a la Loving Wives style (cheating on hubby). He doesn't need another cheating slut wife in his life.

very good story concept, with lots of legs for future instalments ... and very well written