All Comments on 'Brain Games Ch. 04'

It started out on the slower side of things but seems to be picking up steam. You definitively have me wanting to see the next installment.

This story is getting really interesting and the questions are starting to build but they make sense which is why I think this is working so well. I like that Zach is having trouble understanding and working/controlling whatever power he may have. Too many times someone gets a power and has it mastered for the most part in less than one day if not instantly which is another reason this story is working so well, at least to me. I am really looking forward to seeing where this goes and appreciate the time and effort you are taking to continue to build this story. Thank you.

J.D.