All Comments on 'Braless Strap'

Loved it! Keep writing!!

Brilliant , absurd , hilarious , I freaking loved it ! Gonna read your other two and hopefully a lot more in the near future ! One last thing , wow !

At last, some thing different...and its just daft enough to be true.

Fantastic story, I thoroughly enjoyed it thank you.

Aussies are so very lucky that the laws regarding Incest only restrict relationships between Siblings, Parents & Children & Grandparent and Children. Aunts/Uncles/Cousins/Nephews & Nieces are free to engage in a sexual relationship and marry if they consent. The legal age of consent in Australia is 16.

It was just OK. Should have went into much more detail with the sex.

Thank you. Some people seem to think the name of this site should be Literpornica, instead of Literotica. Literary Erotica. Erotic, not crass. The sex was fun, playful, naughty, and woven well into the story. If you just want something to get off to, there are places for that.

If you want something more, a good story with actual plot development and interesting characters you can cheer for, with sex that actually fits comfortably into the telling of the tale, well, fortunately, there are stories like this one. Five Stars!

Exceptionally creative, totally devoid of classic Literotica clichés. Absolutely loved it!

The more I read of your stuff the more I like it. Fun sexy and well crafted. I'm glad I found your entries I am enjoying them all.

Great read

True erotica. Far superior to porn.

Loved it

Clever premise.

But just a long tease. Needed more details about boob action once the sex started. Needed more dialog about how she and her boobs were enjoying his attentions. Needed dialog about how he was enjoying her boobs. Perhaps some dialog about whether he had masturbated to thoughts of her boobs. And how they compared to those visions.

Four stars.

great fun!...

I liked it and very interesting and nice story.

I loved it.

Great story line beautifully written in a very succinct style. The only improvement I might suggest is to be more specific regarding the actual sex between all the various protagonists. Please don't lose touch with your very imaginative muse . . . .