All Comments on 'Brandy in the Afternoon'

Your writing is so adventurous: sometimes funny, almost always highly erotic, captivating, and even frightening. Enjoyed this piece. Please continue to share from your wonderful imagination.

nice!

i like that you contained it to a single page

wide open to a sequel, but if it stands alone, good with that too

looking forward to reading more of your work

cheers!

Your tales really are a joy to read. I particularly liked the little twist in this one where following a serious academic discussion, Professor Elizabeth "...got out of bed naked..." I'm not sure why but Elizabeth reminded me of Flick in your Risen Star series; perhaps because both are strong women who know what they want and don't give a shit for the conventions. Keep up the good work, Monica.

Delicious. That dear Monica is a joy to read. Your sense of humor added to the pure eroticism in the story make for an excellent and pleasurable mix.

Great.. fantastic.. amazing... more adventures from these 3 please :)

Loved this. You are so on form here - sexy, wonderfully graphic were needed, and erotic as fuck xx 5 stars from me.

Hi its Jess

Hope your ok

I love this story

Your command of English is superb and i came when you use the c word

Thank you

Jess xxx

I tend to be partial to slow burn romances but quick hitter stories like this and Rising Star are so well written and draw the reader in right from the start. The sex is just plain hot and in this case I ask. who hasn't enjoyed an unexpected threesome? LOL (IRL or on a page)

nice and nasty

Fast, direct, well-written and hot, hot, hot!

Enjoyed the humour and thesis angle - interesting points you make. Thank you for writing this.

Bloody Brilliant,,, Yes!

Hallo Monica!

That was lovely, though a few too many long words for my English, but still very enjoyable, thank-you, 5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms..

The Black Queen and Gay Kat!

Somerville College, Oxford, by any chance? Sorry, fiction, definitely pure fiction, any resemblance to any real persons is pure coincidence, right? :-)

Must be Shrewsbury, then...

I'd have guessed Newham from certain resemblances, but you had a Dean...

artful..........thank you for the good writing, the good story line. delicately efficient.

a pleasure

Excellent story! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

very rich. wonderful writing. lovely oral...........

thank you

Lovely piece, Monica, your transition from theory to praxis is wonderful…xxx