All Comments on 'Breakdown'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
hot story

it was a hot story but you need to hit the spell check button next time because it is thrust not thrusted. keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very good story

Hope you write more I enjoyed it

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