All Comments on 'Breakfast Stout'

by LillyRae

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Really good!

Jon Stewart never really turned my crank before I read this, but I am going to think filthy thoughts about him every time I see the show now.

And the mechanics: Good editing! Good grammar! Good pacing! Good!

Smart, good writers are sexy. Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hm...

Every consider writing a sequel? Since the he just retired maybe you could use that as he left the job to go find Rachael again to...

currentoccupantcurrentoccupantalmost 8 years ago
He's so hottttt

Excellent choice of subject matter! Great writing, too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

God this was so sexy. I hope you do a sequel!

Jesie18Jesie18about 4 years ago
Ch2?

Please write another

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