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Real_Scarlet_FoxReal_Scarlet_Foxover 3 years agoAuthor
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I would be happy to hear some feedback on this one. Constructive criticism or effusive praise are welcome and I'll respond to anything that isn't rude.

auhound49auhound49over 3 years ago
good story

Decently written. I am also glad you put in pregnancy risk there as so many writers forget sex can result in a baby. Besides preg risk sex can be very hot.

I do hope you will continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I liked it. Pretty hot overall. I came here from the painal tag and honestly, I was expecting him to be a bit more harsh. However, I don’t think it ruined the story or anything I just think maybe the painal tag wasn’t quite right for this story. It’s a good story and I hope you continue writing and maybe even continue this story.

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Scarlet Fox is the pen name of a traditionally published author who is unable to publish erotica under her real name. She lives in Las Vegas with her husband and two precocious dogs. You can view her entire erotica collection on her Amazon author page at https://www.amazon.c...