All Comments on 'Breaking Anna: A Reyna Story'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 6 years ago
This was intriguing at first but it devolved into the usual family enslavement.

Ooo, lets get a Christian family to show off how kinky and depraved they are, thats SO edgy! As if religious people suddenly become super human when they join a church or whatever.

You take a diehard athiest and corrupt him by making him (or her) the most pious and holy of christians and then I’ll be interested.

Back to your story: if no one can resist her, if she always gets her way...its not much of a challenge is it. And life without challenges is boring.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I loved it

I hope to see the father submit to cock in front of his daughters

zena99zena99almost 6 years ago
Fantastic

Reyna is a true Goddess!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nice

I kind of wanted reyna to suck the dads cock, or fuck the dad. Or make the dad fuck both the daughters.. would have been so taboo

doublebinddoublebindabout 5 years ago
Great writing from a domme's perspective

I sometimes find suspension of disbelief difficult with MC stories, but this was very well written -- the pacing is excellent, and Reyna is compelling from the start. Loved the buildup to Anna's (self-)destruction. And I love the subtle psychological domination of, for example:

"So, Reyna," asked John. "What do you do for a living?"

"Anna tells me you're retired," answered Reyna.

I'll be reading the "My Best Friend's Girlfriend" series!

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