All Comments on 'Breaking in a Church Girl Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep going

Great start to what i hope us a long series

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Pathetic

And completely unbelievable. No stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Completely unbelievable, but quite enjoyable. Good effort for a first story. I suggest more could have been made of Alex's father arriving. Rather than just a description of the fucking, perhaps a description of what Lara was feeling about the pastor being in the church. Him slowly climbing the stairs as she approached orgasm .......

curiouscarolecuriouscaroleover 6 years ago
An interesting start

Good point made about Dads arrival but good fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love it second part please

I love this!!!! I need a second part I needa know how he made her sing lol

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