All Comments on 'Breaking in Bill'

Beautiful 😍

I enjoyed it, it was just too much of an abrupt stop at the end. You could of made it a much more enjoyable finish with an extra paragraph or 2 slowly stopping it.

For God sake... check your spelling! Check your grammar. Learn to keep pace and stop changing the language. Would have been a good story but couldn't make it past the first page. Get an editor and proof reader.

Sloppiness and rushing is NOT sexy.

Carole's screams grow rhythmically louder. Her son had given her an organism.

OMG! He gave her an organism. Please have someone read over or edit your story. Other than a couple of spelling errors it's a good story.

I loved the story until it's ending. It sort of stuttered at the end when she sort of kind of stopped the affair. I would have liked more detail when it came to her fooling around with her girlfriend, too.

Totally agree with Sex4lf57.

Can’t read it because of how unrealistic the start is

What a whore.

I don't often read mom/son incest stories in which the characters come off as real, loving and likeable (as well as lickable, ha ha), but these two do. And I like the ending because it makes clear that while things are tapering off eventually, they never quite go away, either. -- Jean

Nice way to take virginity of son and making him expert. I liked the rules and reward of ass fucking in the end.

cheating cumslut whore mom turned out to be. 1*