All Comments on 'Breaking Point'

Couldn't get past the name Kermit.

Kermit is a comic frog. I don't know why so many writers give weird names to characters.

This was a very fun story and you might want to give it one more read through next time though since there were a few spelling mistakes. I hope you continue. I’d love to see what hijinks Kermit and the triplets can get up to.

The perfect big-but-not-particularly-athletic-nerdy-but-really-sweet-guy-gets-the-true-loving-he-so-rightfully-deserves fantasy! Times three! Times G-cups! That's what this site is all about. You're off to a great start.

Don't trust spellcheck to serve as your final editor...even a casual read should (hopefully) make you shudder.

I enjoyed that little story immensely. Please tell me there is a new chapter in the works~

A few bits of random spelling, but fun all the same.

The fact that people don't actually become sex god's immediately is portrayed quite nicely here.

Like, but how did he last 3 orgasms?

Okay, nice story, since I am a little nerd, hits a bit closer to home.

Although I would be scared rather than going for it.

Also, the appearance always matters. He might be pudgy, but thick glasses?

Nerds have glasses that are not thick as well. And nerdy guys have better Moms. Doesn't anybody's parents care?

I find a little bit of myself in Kermit, but then, he could be more intelligent than I am. When I search for nerdy stories, I want one that isn't super intelligent. One that is excellent at teaching, is superb though.

You might have guessed teaching a girl something is my fetish, even if it doesn't result in anything intimate.

This one really prioritized storytelling above the actual sex, and you are quite a decent writer. And G-cup is definitely a cultured choice, as DD-cups are not nearly as large as most people think. And the descriptions of their butts left nothing to the imagination. A creative romp that I was glad to experience.

I thought this was a wonderful story, especially with an average guy getting the girls.

Great 5 star story that I only hate there isn't more to the it. This could have easily been a multi-chapter story showing the budding romance. Sucks that the author is a one and done.

I really like this story. Will there be more?

"Brilliant"..."Great Story"...???!!! Not Really...

I understand this is a first attempt at writing (at least in the Erotica venue)...yet, there is a lot left to desire in the writing.

I looked at your biography; you are a guy, your story is written like a guy, and apparently a young one w/o much experience.

Fantasy...yes! Well-written fantasy...MMMMEEEEHHHHHHHH...more average, due to errors in grammar and terminology...

Four Stars...with hopes to see a sequel that is better-written!

Ok, Christian is awesome xD That last line is killer xD