by vensere
Bon récit dans l'ensemble, juste un peu bâclé sur la fin. Mais j'ais bien aimé.
5 étoiles.
Didn't bother reading this. The synopsis dictates that it's poorly conceived and impossible to bring to any believable conclusion. "Bitchy YOUNG mom is broken down by son's college friend." If her son's in college, she couldn't be that young.
Needs a little bit of editing, but the story has promise. 5 stars as a reward to keep going, plaese.
Great first chapter, love the writing! I hope this story will include physical corruption like wearing slave gear, piercings and tattoos as I think this really enhances corruption stories. This could actually be a good plot point because Kevin seemingly wants to humiliate her appearance when he calls her ugly so slave tattoos and piercing could help to 'improve' that. Anyways I hope for more chapters in the future as this looks really promising
Bookmarked! Great start, hoping for more chapters hopefully including noncon body modification
How the hell do you authors cum up with this stuff.what a great read. You should be proud.an easy 5