All Comments on 'Breaking Stacy Ch. 01'

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Patoche95Patoche954 months ago

Bon récit dans l'ensemble, juste un peu bâclé sur la fin. Mais j'ais bien aimé.

5 étoiles.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Looking forward to part 2!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great story! So hot!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Didn't bother reading this. The synopsis dictates that it's poorly conceived and impossible to bring to any believable conclusion. "Bitchy YOUNG mom is broken down by son's college friend." If her son's in college, she couldn't be that young.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Многообещающее начало писательской деятельности и изучения русского языка.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Needs a little bit of editing, but the story has promise. 5 stars as a reward to keep going, plaese.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great first chapter, love the writing! I hope this story will include physical corruption like wearing slave gear, piercings and tattoos as I think this really enhances corruption stories. This could actually be a good plot point because Kevin seemingly wants to humiliate her appearance when he calls her ugly so slave tattoos and piercing could help to 'improve' that. Anyways I hope for more chapters in the future as this looks really promising

Blac7Blac74 months ago

Bookmarked! Great start, hoping for more chapters hopefully including noncon body modification

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Looking forward to where you take her in the new year!

RA

Fifty41Fifty412 months ago

How the hell do you authors cum up with this stuff.what a great read. You should be proud.an easy 5

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