All Comments on 'Breaking the Curse'

by TruthwithaTwist

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RbrsaraRbrsaraabout 1 year ago

I like how you developed the characters. I found myself caring about them, so although the sex was hot, the story bouyed me along. Good writing.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Love the story but I though they would wind up together

chaylogicchaylogic4 months ago

This was great! I felt a real arc with these two. Everything felt vary believable, like this could have happened in real life - which made the fact that she has fake boobs doubley-hot for my liking.

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