Breaking the Rules Ch. 01

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Steve moved the toy up to her puckered hole and gently pressed it in.

Skye shuddered "Oooohhh god... Maybe turn it off to begin with," she giggled.

Steve did as he was told and started to push again.

"I think it needs more spit," he said.

Skye just looked at him, wondering if he meant she needed to add it or if he wanted to do it himself.

He looked around as if attempting to recall the invisible rule book they had been drawing from for this very situation.

As if relatively satisfied he wouldn't be breaking any of these un-written laws, he leaned forward to hover over her tight little buttocks and gathered some saliva in his mouth before letting the spit drop out of his mouth, hitting squarely where he was aiming as it dribbled down her pussy lips and dripped the excess fluid onto the bed.

Then without even thinking, he took the vibrator into his mouth to lubricate it further. He could taste her love juices all over it, it was wrong... But oh so sexy!

After he was satisfied there would be no more abrasive dryness, he moved the cylinder back to her asshole and pushed it slowly inside. It was met with considerable resistance to begin with, only managing to get it in maybe half an inch. He then watched as she expelled the air she was holding in her lungs, in turn relaxing her muscles allowing the toy past her sphincter and letting it easily side the rest of the way in.

"UUUuuhhmm..." Skye breathed "Just leave it there and let me get used to it,"

He continued his strokes on his cock, starting to get faster now. As Skye watched him pleasure himself, she now moved her own hand up to her pussy and started gently rubbing her clit as she let herself adjust to the pressure from behind.

Steve released the toy and let it slide about half way out before pushing it back in again. After trying this a few times, he could see she was really enjoying the new feeling as she wiggled her ass towards him with each movement.

Skye moved her hand up to her pussy and started rubbing her clit again as Steve pumped her from the other end.

"Does that feel anywhere near as good as it looks??" Steve whispered.

Skye's breaths where coming in shallow pants now "Let's just say... I won't last long... At this rate," she said between breaths.

Without asking, Steve flicked the button on the end of the toy back to the 'on' position and it came back to life inside of her.

The arm which was holding the top of her body up immediately collapsed underneath her, her head landing on the bed whilst pushing her bottom further into the air. Her head was still facing him but her eyes where closed and her mouth was open in a silent moan as she held her breath and the muscles in her entire body seemed to had tensed up all at the same time.

Even the toy inside of her ass had been gripped by her anal muscles and neither wanted to move in OR out of her at this point as the vibrations sent her into overdrive.

Slowly as Skye adjusted to this new found sensation, her body started to relax yet again as she resumed her rubbing on her pussy and expelled the air from her open mouth, letting herself enjoy the feelings that where pulsing through her.

She slid two fingers into her other hole with ease from the generous amount of liquid that seemed to be flowing freely from her pussy at this point and opened her eyes to look at Steve again.

"I'm... Uuuhhh... I'm..." she struggled to say as she continued to try keep the noise down "Ohhh... Fuck... I'm gonna cum Steve!"

Steve continued to pump himself as he pushed the toy as far into her as it could go, still careful not to have any skin to skin contact between them as he did so.

It sent her over the edge as she convulsed and twisted her head around to muffle any noises she couldn't hold from coming out of her mouth into the pillow. Her legs flung together as she pumped her pussy with her fingers and fell onto the bed in a foetal position as her body strained in climax.

Steve could feel the familiar sensation of cum brewing in his nether regions as he looked around franticly for something to catch the inevitable stream of sperm that would soon come out of his dick.

Skye had started to come down from her orgasm and now opened her eyes just enough to see him looking around with a panicked look on his face. She slid herself towards him and hung her head off the side of the bed, not quite having the strength to hold herself up just yet.

"Just use my mouth," she said, still breathing heavily. "It's ok, I wont touch it with my hands. Just guide it in," she said trying to sound more soothing this time.

He continued to look around with even more desperation this time, although not once did he slow his movements. Torn between what felt like one of the most amazing build up to an orgasm he'd ever felt before and not wanting to break any rules, he went to spin on his feet to aim at the floor when he felt a hand on his hip.

He looked down to see his sister in law looking up at him with her head still hanging over the edge. Both of her arms had reached out and where now pulling his hips towards him.

He hadn't noticed till now, but her nightie top had ridden down on her and was up around her armpits, giving him a clear view of her gorgeous breasts. He couldn't wait any longer.

Throwing caution to the wind, he pointed his cock towards her mouth and placed the head just inside of her. She responded by closing her lips around it forming a seal as what felt like galleons of his seed came spewing out of him.

The majority of it managed to shoot directly down her throat as some of it started to fill her mouth. She lapped it up eagerly as he came but when Steve became slightly unsteady on his feet, his dick managed to break free of the seal around her lips, letting just the tiniest two little streams escape the tip, flying onto her bare breasts and dribbling down her chest.

Then there was a noise from down the hall.

Steve recognised it as his bedroom door opening.

Quickly he jammed his still rock hard cock which was still shooting the rest of his cum straight into his boxers and hurried out of her room to the nursery where Alexandria was still fast asleep.

"Steve?" Alice muttered down the hall, not wanting to wake her sister who was currently cleaning off her husband's sperm from her breasts.

"Yeah honey?" Steve said quietly from the doorway of the nursery.

"Did Alexandria wake up?"

"Yeah, she's just about back to sleep now,"

"You need a hand?" she asked.

"No need babe," He smiled at her in the darkness "You go back to bed now, I'll just use the loo quickly and be back in with you in a few mins,"

"Ok no worries," she said as she disappeared back into her room.

Steve quickly checked if all the commotion had woken their baby then went into the bathroom to clean the mess he had made in his pants.

Before he went back to bed he poked his head into the spare room.

She was back in bed with the blankets on and twisted her head to look at him. They just looked at each other and smiled awkwardly.

"Night," she whispered.

"Night," he replied before closing the door silently and making his way back to his room.

He gently kissed his wife's forehead before lying down in the bed beside her and attempting to drift off to sleep.

To be continued...

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
How could you!

How could you write something this good and not follow up? You’re killing me!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
POARED

If you’re going to capitalize a word, you should really spell it right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
hot

This story was amazingly sexy keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Where is part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Part 2

eagerly waiting for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Part 2?

I loved this story, part two?

KnightlyKnightlyover 8 years ago
How hot...

To think your sister-in-law would offer her mouth so as not to make a mess. I'm going to check your other stories, and I HOPE there is a chapter 2.

ramonbrookramonbrookover 8 years ago
Your name says it all!

FUCK YEAH! Nice!

Love this genre of erotica! Please keep this story going. If that is what happens with Alice in the house, what will happen when Alice is at her parents house and Skye and Steve are home alone?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice!!

Just wanted to say how good this was! Don't worry about the idiots going in about your grammar or spelling... Anyone reading these stories and are concerned about THAT really needs an evaluation because they read these stories far too much.

I was into the story from the beginning. You gave great background and had an amazing lead up to the climax. Amazing that you told this story without going the whole nine yards like everyone else would do. You kept the suspense to the very end and finished with a bang. Keep it up! Can't wait for the sequel... Maybe have Skye visit her sister's bed in the middle of the night to please her brother in law without waking Alice.

fuckyeah123fuckyeah123over 8 years agoAuthor
Wow where do I start??

Ok firstly I'd like to again thank the readers who gave me good votes and I'm glad you all enjoyed it!

As for the feedback, I can't leave it without addressing some issues...

To 'anonymous' who said I insult my readers:

You are right, I construct and post stories on this site for FREE and readers read them for free. Everyone is entitled to their own oppinion and are more than welcome to voice said opinions, HOWEVER, if you are going to poke holes in the accuracy of my storyline, I too have the right to defend it (and seriously, who "gives it" to their wife right after they've given birth?? Have the decency to let her recover!)

Also, I DO like the criticism I get... When it is CONSTRUCTIVE. There is a large difference between constructive cristisisum and just some keyboard warrior who wants to have a winge. I am more than happy to take different ideas and opinions on board to help better my writing and story line. When people simply say they hated it because they aren't into a particular "kink" I have added, or simply that I have poor editing skills without bothering to point out exactly where I went wrong, that's when it crosses that line.

To dream69:

Sad to see you're "pretty much done" with reading my strories. I sincerely apologize for wronging you and I'm not sure how I will be able to sleep tonight. Perhaps I will sleep soundly knowing that the person who just said all my stories are average with mistakes only a ten year old would make, has NEVER actually attempted to construct a story of his own ;) have fun with that one champ.

Oh and as for having "average" stories, it's a strange thing to hear seeing that on AVERAGE, the majority of my stories have received 4 and a half stars out of 5. It may be an idea for you to research the meaning of that word before you comment like that again!

To livetoread:

I'm glad you liked it and thank you for what i would classify as constructive criticism ;) as for getting an editor, I have before and still received comments saying the editing was below standards. Personally I would rather continuing to edit the stories myself and try to improve with each story. I was HOPING that my readers would help me with that one by actually pointing out some of my recurring errors rather than simply telling me I need an editor in general.

I feel that I have vastly improved since my first story, and hope to continue along that trend.

To conclude:

Please feel free to tell me you've liked the story and why.

Please feel free to tell me where I may have gone wrong as far as editing goes by pointing out SPECIFIC mistakes. This will help massively.

If you simply didn't like it because "you don't like anal" or "you don't like it when mummy and daddy join in" please don't bother posting.

I have personally read stories which have evolved into kinks that I do not PERSONALY enjoy. Instead of saying I hated it, I simply left it and went to a different story. Just because I don't like what happened doesn't mean there aren't others who enjoy it.

It would be like a prude getting on literotica.com and telling everyone that our stories are sick and twisted simply because he/she doesn't enjoy erotic stories. I believe the term I'm looking for is "live and let live".

I feel that we as the literotica community can do more to help each other by either leaving a simple thank you I liked it note OR criticizing the story in a way that shows you simply want to help.

Leaving all this "hate mail" is less than helpful. Why does everyone have to be so angry about leaving out a full stop here and there or spelling a word wrong? I'm sure it doesn't affect your life that adversely.

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