All Comments on 'Breaking the Rules Pt. 11'

A great start. But then you got to the pygmy trolls and I could not keep up with whatever the heck was going on. Other than a dead paladin, I still don't know what happened. Surely locking him in a cage was a violation of the "rules".

Some madcap action you made me read

I'm glad we saw those Troupers bleed

Though less there was, by way of sex

(Which other readers might be vexed)

I hope to read more story soon,

But must wait a whole half-moon!

I’m not sure what just happened.

I know there was a fight, but I’m not entirely sure who was fighting. I guess some sort of unwashed gymnasts/clowns? And the other side was Nauru’s friends, with some extra backup? Or was the paladin unrelated, and came alone to try to free the other prisoner? Is the troop more like clowns, or like the white faced guys from the last Mad Max movie?

I’m going to stop trying to think about it, as it’s making my head hurt.