All Comments on 'Breakpoint Pt. 01'

Always like sports stories. This seems to be one of the better ones.

Okay this was so well-done... goddamn!!!! You managed to make tennis erotic for me, and have very nicely set the context of this petulant young woman’s strengths and limitations as a player, and as a human. I like her a lot as a a heroine... clearly strong willed and used to being the dominant partner but hopelessly selfish and arrogant. She’s very aware of her beauty, sexual power, and inherent tennis talent... I yearn to see her being taken down many many pegs and become better for it.

Thanks anons!

I'm glad you enjoyed Sasha's characterization! She has been fun to write and was my real inspiration for the story. You know where it's headed, but hopefully you'll enjoy the journey to get there...

I love the potential you have created with every character having their own perspective and goals. There is obvious conflict in so many directions. Sasha is used to getting her way and knows she is hot. I’m glad you resisted the temptation to make the narrator single because this raises the stakes in a unique way.. now he has to resist and the stakes couldn’t be higher. There is so much room for power to go back and forth. I’m excited to see how it plays out.

Really enjoyed the whole premise of this story and the erotic potential of where it could go. JmMTotally eager for more...hurry up. Thanks

Fantastic story.