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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Seems too oddball / unfinished almost

Nice try. Ending seemed so abrupt.

GrttrnGrttrnover 3 years ago
Good story start

Could do additional chapters elsewhere(or not) character devolopment is off to a good start for the intensity of the storyline

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great start----weird end

Liked how it started....seemed like there could have been many spin-off's my imagination took this many places it didn't go. In the end it was a good wholesome view into a vanilla life even with the Big Bang that it started off with.

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