All Comments on 'Breath of Fresh Air Ch. 02'

This story has a nice plot, the characters are well written and you left enough space for at least three more chapters ;-)

Keep up the good work!

BTW, five * from me...

I love the development of the characters and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

More soon please!

Please please update sooon! This story is so awesome!!

Going to have to create an account just so I can favorite this story. Love the storyline and thanks for the length :)

Keep up the addicting work!,

Your storyline has hooked me, to date. The plot is moving well thanks to well-written interesting characters. And at my age (sixty-mumble) the story part of a stroke-story is a lot more important than the stroke part. ;->

Lit ID: Tyro999

I'm really enjoying how this story is unfolding. I can't wait for your next chapter. Keep up the great work.

I'm liking this story a lot! Waiting impatiently for the next chapter.

I'm very interested in where the characters are going. This is a fun story line too, there's more to this than just some stroke material. Good stuff, keep it up.

This second part was everything I hoped for and more. I'm super glad they didn't have sex. Basically with Mike you're creating a character that I'd very much like to give everything to if he actually existed! I also really liked how you brought up the subject of Katie's abuse...I didn't see it coming, which I guess was the plan. It adds a whole other level to their relationship.

Bravo on a job well done. Aren't you super glad you took your time ;).

More, more and more please!

I look forward to the next chapter(s)! Please don't keep us waiting but do continue the excellent writing.

Please give us more, SOOOON! I love the story!

How did I miss this story!!! Mike is a sweetheart and that tent scene was steamy phew!

Exactly the type of story i would write if i could.

This is the type of story I look for when searching all over Literotica. One of the few ones I just love everything about. And I'm picky. :) every aspect was perfect.

Great plot, imagery, and dialog. Can't wait to read about their date on the next Friday. It's got to be good. On to Chapter 3.

Thanks Mike, ladies use your words. I understand "like that" better than "ungg" both are appreciated, you covered a lot of nice differences between us. Yes its different but please swallow or share with me, would you be frustrated if I pulled off you as you started your orgasm. Oh God no its Mike that was funny and a real ego booster. I did like Mike holding Katie at the edge till she agreed to go out on Friday that was something I never thought to try.

sex is always to quick, the foreplay and loving before and after make it special. good story so far.