All Comments on 'Breathe'

by l8lastnight

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well done

Very good narrative and erotic, with no discernible errors.

racfguyracfguyover 8 years ago
Disgusting

Tyrone is a bully, an asshole, a predator and a rapist.

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A returning author formerly writing under the name Truenorth1969 (my work is still up here posted under that name if anyone is interested). Thanks for reading and commenting!