All Comments on 'Breathless'

I loved this story, shame the victim didn't get a few more smokey breaths first!

Why people end up dead in the E.R.? They play stupid games. And write even dumber stories about them.

I have to admit I wish it was him doing it to her but this was still sex and hot. I wish you'd write more. This is a big fantasy of mine

That was... enthralling. So hot. I got soaked just reading it, hoping for something similar to happen to me. That was incredible.

Why did you stop?, she was still alive.

Very exciting.... could feel myself doing it to my slave as I read the story.......hard as a ROCK!