All Comments on 'Breathless Ch. 04'

This is good.

And that scene with the wraith, how wonderfully imaginative! A kink I couldn't have conceived of!

I am so looking forward to the rest of this story. And, hopefully, a couple of vampires roasting in the sun.

Well done.

From start to finish. I agree, the love scene between Mel and Mary was amazingly sensuous and sexy. I normally skim over any passages dealing with lesbian sex, because it doesn't really interest me. But it was your description of the thoughts and emotions of each of them that made that part of the chapter really enthralling and I really enjoyed it.<br><br>

So Sadie is even more mysterious? I love it. She and Vlad generate incredible heat! I want more.<br><br>

And stating the obvious: Lord Frost is not to be trusted.

Glad my internet issues have been solved so I could read this without my connection crashing on me. I loved the scene between Mary and Mel... IMO, it's one of your best so far. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

This story is shaping up to be among the best on this site, extremly good work, keep it up!

Kind of love this story.. for once someone that don't go for the ordinary Dominant/Submissive theme.. Quite refreshing.. And I'm in total agreement towards the necessity of love in anything relating to relations of whatever kind.. It's not like we all need to be the same sexually, but we should at least strive for love and not destruction.. Yoron

Just a guess on my part, but I think she might be Eve

Enjoying the series.

From chapter to chapter its getting intense pleasurable ....... Thats truly a extraordinary story

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