All Comments on 'Breathless Ch. 05'

This is getting very good!

I'm loving this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Damn that Bart! I hope Sadie doesn't fuck him at some point...

Oh my! This is the best one yet. You are by far my FAVORITE author on this site. All of your stories are so beautiful and when I read them I feel as though I am actually there. Please hurry with this one and more!!!

I've been longing for an update - thank you so much!

The only problem with these multi-part stories is the wait for the next peice. Oh well, I can take it. I certainly wouldn't want you to stop writing them, after all.

-zengar

Yanno, I've read pretty much every story you've posted here... might have missed one along the line somewhere, but I have read most of them. The one thing your multi-chapter stories have in common for me is that I practically tear my hair out waiting for the next chapter to get posted. I can't wait to see the next chapter :)

More please it's one of your best since deadman's world

the title is so apt..it is trully breathless...thank you so much for this series..i am loving it.

ok, keep it commin' this is a fantastic story in a fantastic world, I love the irreverent humour you inject into your stories.

Oh shit, I'd like to use more expressive language but decorum prohibits. Magnificent.

You are one of the best writers on Lit and this story deserves to be published, is that good! Keep 'em coming!

what a great piece of writing.even without the sex its one of the best and the most gripping stories i have ever come across on in my three years of being a literotica fan.gr8 work!!

In my haste toget to the next chapter I keep fogeting to vote. This being my thirds reading of this story, and all the rest, I have to say I LOVE each and every one of them. Even the Fantasy Horror characters are believably human???? Nothing I like more than spending a day off perusing through the realms of Evil Alpaca.

... this is tense! I would so read this without any of the sex at all, but the sex just makes it even better!

this is such a great story, and like the commenter said before without the sex it would still be amazing. damn i wish terrance hadn't died :(

Poor Sadie!! SOMETHING is obviously terribly upsetting for her about this 'Blood Stain'. I wonder why....?

I've read this before and even a second time still a great tale. Really didn't want Terrence to die ( uncommon spelling for Terrence which also happens to be the way mine is spelled.) as I kinda feel an affinity for him , but that is what is part of a great story, the unexpected. Happy to have read all your stories.

Canadian Cowboy

But the typos are driving me crazy. I can normally overlook several but it's pretty bad in all the chapters. His instead of her, to instead of too and many others. Just too many to ignore. Having someone proof read the chapters first would have been very helpful. Great story line though.

Wow ...... Now this is growling under my skin ...... This is definitely a story and a intensiv one ....... Until here to this chapter im impressed ....... Your are damn talented