All Comments on 'Bred by Daddy at Sea'

This was fucking amazing.

The daughter comes across like a high school freshman...or even younger.I

No maturity and a vocabulary real girls haven't had since the '50s.

That makes daddy seem like a predator taking advantage.

You can still have a hot story with an intelligent woman, someone who knows what she is doing and understands the consequences.

Hope they have many more

I loved this story: I loved the naughtiness of it; the father’s devotion; the daughter’s sexuality.... I masterbated while reading it. Sooo good.

Good solid story but on page one, his daughter is a blonde. On page three, a brunette. Odd. No mention of a change of hair color to keep their secret

This is a story very well written but what put me off was juvenile word choices. “Boner” and “boobies” stand out in this story because they don’t match the rest of the excellent vocabulary being used. It often felt that the descriptive sex scenes went from romantic and mature to dirty and childish.

In 18 years Dave will be approaching 70, Kelly will be 36 or 37 and the oldest son will be 18. This presents some interesting possibilities for a skilled writer like Maisy P.

Loved it. She seems too naive for today but please continue their story.

Love that they keep making babies so daddy can keep drinking her milk!

Hope Dave has a real good retirement income that will support daughter and all the kids he wants to have.

Loved it!

I would have loved to tasted her pussy after he bred her. And each time he stuck her with his big daddy cock and pumped his semen deep into her pussy.

Very well done.

So naughty and dirty. Loved it.

Loved it..

Exactly What I've Been Wanting, Needing to Find ! Mmm if only Daddy had a Natural Hunger for her Milk Like I Have !

Seriously amazing story, as my wet pussy is evidence of. I hope daddy gets to nurse on his growing girls bobbies every day of his life

YOUR BEST STORY BY FAR

One of the best father-daughter stories

Seriously this is the hottest sentence ever “… be a pregnant mommy, nursing your daddy's baby?”

I can relate I had a friend she invited me to her boat and her dad was there me and her father were both went to high school together I remember when he found out that he was a dad well she was just starting to get a job in are company so she said her dad had a boat and that she was going on the boat with her dad for a week to go to the Bahamas so she invited me I already got invited but she didn’t know that so I said sure . We flew back to Texas together everybody on the plane thought she was my smoking hot wife even the teenager kicking the back of my seat. We get to the boat and start departing the dock a couple hours later when we’re on the golf coast I hear noise coming from the cabin of the boat while I take the steering wheel so I go and check if everything alright I was shocked to see my ex best friend in his daughter with no protection asking for his baby I went back to the bowl of the boat and puked over the side went to the wheel and kept on that trying to keep my mind off of what I just saw when they both come out of the cabin she sun tans in front of were you steer with a pillow under neath her butt . All through the vacation I couldn’t look at them right. When we were flying back a couple weeks later she told me that she found out that she pregnant and that she was going to move back to Texas to be with her family but that we still could be friends and I said I don’t think so I know who that babies father is she looked up set but realized I was right nine months later she sent me a text of her father holding the twin baby girls and being like thanks for keeping the secret look at the proud dad and that was the last I heard of her till I bumped into her in a Ohio Walmart 9 months pregnant with the twins baby brother

Mmm loved it

The only decent story you gave written and its a great 5*

This story was great. All your others were absolute crap

Loved the story

Of all the incest genres the mother/son relationships seem to be the most erotic. And when it is coupled by the son impregnating his mother the hotter the story.

I had an incestuous relationship with my younger brother in high school. It started when he was a freshman and I a senior. Like the couple in the story, we fell deeply in love. But we both knew to have a meaningful life we would both have to finish our education so we would be able to afford the niceties of life. Like a beautiful community to raise our children. Yes, we have five beautiful children. I know that Tomas, my brother, would have no problem fucking our youngest daughter and giving her his babies. And I too would fuck our father and have his babies had the option had come up.

We both so have enjoyed the story.

Wildly erotic. Loved it.

very erotic,,not usually what i read, but it was well done,,

women do not leak milk before giving birth. They might, however, close to term, leak colostrum, instead, but that changes soon after the baby is born. Clearly the author did not know that, or where a woman's cervix is ACTUALLY Located, or how impossible some of the things described were, on a planet with humans, anyway.