All Comments on 'Bred by the Hive Ch. 01'

A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Interesting idea with a slightly novel presentation, although the premise is far from unique. I find the very thing stated to make the females resistant to parasitical infection to be the weakest--and the reasoning behind that is if they were made that way, they would have a far higher pain threshold--and therefore the ability to self-terminate.

I will read more, to see where it goes. 4