All Comments on 'Breed Me Big Brother 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thanks for the 'harem' warning. That always completely ruins the heat of any I/T story. Pass. I'll hope for something better from your next offering.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I've read all the stories in this universe that you've written and in general I think they're pretty good. However, and maybe this is because we didn't get anything from clint's perspective, this story really made him seem like an asshole. It seemed against the sayings his father taught him that he kept mentioning earlier in the series. To ignore the desires of his women, which he was doing until there was a need for a huge scene, would make him undeserving.

sp9983sp9983about 2 years ago

Not again. Is this going to run another 14 parts? Hello, come down to planet earth.

DanDraperDanDraperabout 2 years ago

What the fuck did I just read?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I guess the women in this family have little to no respect for themselves if they let this guy be such an asshole to them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The worst part about this story is realizing there may be a second chapter to continue this garbage.

coolstrangeravenuecoolstrangeravenueabout 2 years ago

comments from anonymous identities shouldn't even show up, story is great

AdrianicusAdrianicusabout 2 years ago

If you don't like the story then stop reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I thought this story was wonderful. If you don’t like it leave

DustyDevilDustyDevilabout 2 years ago

Kind of corny but from a totally fictional point not bad. 3 1/2 stars

Diecast1Diecast1about 2 years ago

Love the story. AAAAAA++++++

Tom MandyTom Mandyalmost 2 years ago

Hot stuff though all the stuff with Princess just makes me think of Tommy Wiseau in the Room

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

coolstrangeravenue, shut up!

We are supposed to give our opinions. The authors request them. I agree, however, that the criticism should be CONSTRUCTIVE.

TransguycharlieTransguycharlie9 months ago

Im wanking hard if that helps your know how much I liked it

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg1237 months ago

"Breed Me Big Brother 01:" - What a stroke story...akin to "wham bam, thank ya Ma'am." Too many young, nubile sluts, to keep track of from one to the others. Being such a stroke story, incest looses it's value, except to add a little dignity to the theme.

Evil_MonarchEvil_Monarch6 months ago

this Alicia is so annoying

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