by mypenname3000
Thanks for the 'harem' warning. That always completely ruins the heat of any I/T story. Pass. I'll hope for something better from your next offering.
I've read all the stories in this universe that you've written and in general I think they're pretty good. However, and maybe this is because we didn't get anything from clint's perspective, this story really made him seem like an asshole. It seemed against the sayings his father taught him that he kept mentioning earlier in the series. To ignore the desires of his women, which he was doing until there was a need for a huge scene, would make him undeserving.
Not again. Is this going to run another 14 parts? Hello, come down to planet earth.
I guess the women in this family have little to no respect for themselves if they let this guy be such an asshole to them.
The worst part about this story is realizing there may be a second chapter to continue this garbage.
comments from anonymous identities shouldn't even show up, story is great
Hot stuff though all the stuff with Princess just makes me think of Tommy Wiseau in the Room
coolstrangeravenue, shut up!
We are supposed to give our opinions. The authors request them. I agree, however, that the criticism should be CONSTRUCTIVE.
"Breed Me Big Brother 01:" - What a stroke story...akin to "wham bam, thank ya Ma'am." Too many young, nubile sluts, to keep track of from one to the others. Being such a stroke story, incest looses it's value, except to add a little dignity to the theme.