All Comments on 'Breeder Choice Ch. 04'

You really need someone to proof read your stories. You

do not spell well and your sentence structure needs lots of help. Try to find a reviewer for your next story.

dude whatever Editor. this story was effing hott! loooved it!

the first time i went to an all out gay orgy was back in the good old pre aids daus...you fucked, you came, you swallowed, your man cunt was filled. i was still getting used to being bi and hesitant. i spent an hour or so touching, sucking a cvouple of cocks, kissing, u eventually giot so horny i was put on my knees on a coucvh with many men watching. i loved being fucked, loved the big cock working in me. usually when i came, that was it so when a man moved undr me and started so suck me i told him to stop, but he clamped his mouth and my cum exploded. as i relaxed, my man cunt was paining me, i pulled away and sauid no im soeey i cant get fucked anymore now that ive cum. my lover screamed at me andyelled look at the little teaser, says he cant fuck ow, take this bitch and he rammed into me as i moaned in pain. after he bred me, he called out lets teach this slut. i was fucked by foiur more men as i writhed in pain, but eventuallty felt desire returning. it was a while before i got to another orgy, but then sought out partners and came several times but kept wanting to be fucked more. i had bec0me a total slut. it was wonderful.

Pretty hot story but I've been sucking cock for over 20 years and I still don't know what the hell a "semi uncut cock" is. Would Cruiser care to enlighten me.

Bill at emwll9@aol.com

I hsve been to partirs like this onr. It is so good to ne able to suck cocks and get fucked multiple timed. I do have to admit that my ass was sore for a couple days, but just reminded me of how good it felt while I was being fucked