All Comments on 'Breeding at the Vet's Office Ch. 02'

I liked the first chapter much more, this one seemed disjointed to me.

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After all, if we operate on instinct, it would be natural to dispose of the previous alpha males' brood. Dumbass, you can't have it both ways. It's either instinct or choice. We CHOOSE to be monogamous. We CHOOSE who we are going to fuck or to be fucked by. Otherwise, as soon as a woman went into heat, every Tom, Dick and Harry would be pounding her pussy and killing each other. FUCK, I hate retards who think this kind of shit up. Do us all a favor...stop writing...go back to working at 7-11 because you are an idiot who shouldn't be allowed to have children in case you pollute them with your cockamamie ideas.

Sex was good, story silly, but what the fuck it's friday.

It's a story people! As a matter of fact I don't work at 7-11, I have a bit more stressful job then that. There are some of you out there who do get the stories as just a bit of a fantasy, but I have been getting much email from angry, angry, angry, angry people! I don't write to highlight a particular blight on our current social culture. I write for the frustrated teenager and anyone of us who has or had a thing for older women.

I'm sure there are some of you out there who were english majors in college who just love to correct everything I ever write....guess what...I don't care. While you english majors were out drinking every night, us science majors were trying to figure out better ways to detect and fight cancer (speaking for this one anyway) I find myself writing to de-stress...thats when the stories come out, you don't like them, don't read them. Oh and by the way I'm not into violence or burning people to death as some of you great thinkers have been emailing me....you people don't even have the balls to give you user name...so I guess my enemy is anonymous...what a joke

Irishdragon,

Thank you for continuing to write in spite

of such negative comments.

I've thoroughly enjoyed your stories .. thank

you for all your time and effort.

For those who post negative comments .. if

you don't like stories from this category then

don't read them.

If you think you can do a better job, write

your own stories .. but be prepared for critics

just like yourselves.

This story is clearly a 1000, in a possible 100. I would hope that you continue it with her pregnancy, and the two of them continuing to make babies in their lust for each other, of course while she remains married to her worthless husband to give those babies a sense of legitimacy and a name. Only an indepth story of enjoyment of bathing in hot golden "water" as they lay in bed after their fuck sessions, rinsing the seeping cum from her pubic area that was not needed to create that new life in her womb, as well as the defacating that might take place from not getting out of bed and going to the bathroom/toilet, could exceed the lust in this story. My dick is hard as I read this story and I have creamed my pants in imagining what was taking place from their beginnings of creation of their new family in lustful description.

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I love your stories....but this one seems to be off from the first. In your first story she was pregnant after that encounter then she's not. All in all still a good story.

I really don't know how much more erotic you could have made this story. It was the best! Perhaps you can continue it with more chapters of making more babies for their pride?

husband finds there is this going on and created a child? consequences for all? with physical traits differing, it all can come crashing in

The story would be good if you cared to PROOFREAD it. Really, just do a search for question marks in your text and correct the mistakes next to them.

Go back and give us another chapter please.

Purely entertaining!

I am confused. Is this a continuation or a re-imagining of the first story? Both were very hot, but the first one was better.

It conflicts with the first ch.

A hot story , well written , Please continue

The stories did not go together, Arthur should have read story 1 again or stopped with it!!

Get pregnant by the kid? Sure.

Throw the multi-million dollar earner (probably 3 Mil for the rest of his career) over the side? Not so much.

Rewrite!

There is a huge difference in the two. I frequently had to stop and re-read your sentences because the words may have been spelled right, but they were the wrong words, i.g. "he" should have been "her". There are too many instances of these types of errors for me to list. so just have another set of eyes (rather than spellchecker) read your works before you submit them. Thanks. Good stories in this series!

don't explain every goddamned metaphor or bit of symbolism, your audience isn't that stupid. It takes the hotness away and makes the whole thing seem so stupid. You saved it with the dialogue and sex, maximize that, and don't explain your metaphors leave them for the audience to figure out, or if you must don't use whole damn paragraphs to do it.

if they like drivel like this... get rid of her..

History, but even her kids have forgotten it.

Jimmy will find himself without his balls after Michael catches them. I see very sad times ahead for the kids.

Drawing by numbers and color blind

My brother in-law and I were best friends before he married my sister. I asked when are you two going to start a family? He said we have been trying I hope it happens soon it seems to be bothering your sister. Well my sister finally became pregnant about a year later. I'm not one of those guys when I look at a baby and say Daddy he or she looks like you or he or she looks like you mommy or he or she has both of your features. When I look at my nephew I thought buddy you do not look like either of your parents. You look like someone I don't know. Later on I noticed that my brother-in-law seem to be acting off for some reason. I am talking a little over a year later. He and I were alone and I asked what's going on you and I have been friends long before you married my sister. What he said said shocked me. He said I'm not Little Jake's father. I asked what are you talkin about? Like I told you he said I am not Jake's father. I grabbed and hugged him and I asked do you want to talk about it? He went on to explain that my sister was wanting to have a child bad enough to have blood Chad Karns I have sex with her three time when she was at her best possible chance of getting pregnant. Dad is my carbon copy she said. Hair color eye color height and is built like me. No Love No ongoing affair just a squishy in the storage room three days in a row. He's married and has two children correct? Yes and your sister said he doesn't want anything to do with the child. Also I had told her that would help again in the future if she wanted to get pregnant again. I asked what are you going to do? He said I love that little boy just like he was my own I hate what she done without talking to me there are honest ways of getting pregnant and the deal is she's expecting again. She told that this was it she only had sex with him three times this time also. I asked what are you going to do? Would you think that I was stupid if I said I want to make it work she says she will never let another man touch her ever again that she loves only me she had only had one other dick in her 6 times and it was to get her pregnant and that she prayed for me to forgive her. If we split she still would wait for me that she would never take to another man my sister told him. My sister found another job and it was what she had wanted to do anyway. They are still together their oldest is getting ready to go to college. I told my brother-in-law he was one Hell of a man.

Your brother-in-law’s a fucking cuck dude