All Comments on 'Breeding Day'

Put down the keyboard and look at your hands. Let them rest from making words. That's enough, we don't need more of this put in public places. It doesn't make sense outside of your dreams.

Great read, ignore the bitter naysayer

Yeah, it is a weirdly angry comment, right? Can't even really tell what they found so offensive, but you can't please everybody.

I'm glad you enjoyed it nevertheless.

Well, I certainly enjoyed this, and look forward to seeing more of this world (be it Avery's continuing story, or just another look at a part of the world in the aftermath of Ian's "intervention").

This is a brilliant work and you deserve a heck of a lot more praise. The free use kind of scenario here is lovely, especially the friendly nature of it all. I'd love to read a continuation, or simply a similar story. After all, your other story with the family was truly brilliant!

This is an amazing story, and it should be rocketed up in terms of popularity. If you're writing more, I cannot wait for you to release what you come up with next!

Started off average, but the ending was quite entertaining.

I loved how the author hyped up expectations then booped the audience with "Ian from Financial Services". Legit hilarious