All Comments on 'Breeding Experiment'

No. In fact, Hell, no.

But in this case worth it. But seriously try plan b pills first.

WGAS... 0

Boy, I’ve read lousy but this takes the cake!

@MattblackUK bro, like at least wait for Juliet to release the working draft of the research paper on Curt before making accusations of witchcraft.

No! In fact, hell no!

Just bad.

Clunky. Nothing story. At least the spelling and grammar were above average. Perhaps the next story will have a bit more finesse. Keep at it.

no more idiotic than the garbage stories in which wives have magic cunts that make "broken men" whole again, which justifies their leaving their husbands to go off for a weekend with a another man to provide "healing".

Dumb Dumb and Dumber all rolled into one

hello

If you want to disparage the 2nd Amendment and gun ownership you need to stop writing stories where a big person tyrannizes a small person, especially women. It just gives these gun nuts ideas. When Tom gets out of the hospital he needs to take some sensitivity training. He also needs to find out what Curt's favorite beer is, since I'm thinking Anne is going to need some pretty regular treatments.

Thanks for the effort.

to our Intelligence. Trash since the first word.

Let me get this straight, Anne can't be part of the study, yet you comment says, 'at least wait for Juliet to release the working draft of the research paper on Curt before making accusations of witchcraft.' Do we really care about Curt? When some husband with cracked ribs decides to shot his balls off, or slash his dick off, there won't need to be a study after that. It makes you want to ask, 'If a Curt got blown down in a forest, would anyone care?'

the author never got to it.

I have yet to read an 'insemination' story that was any good, around here...

And you know what? The losing streak continues.

Very poor. What about artificial insemination? Considering how Curt acted, 1) he should be arrested for assault and battery and 2) Anne will end up divorced as a single mother. How would a hospital / research group condone Curt's behavior? You took an idea and didn't complete the story. Tom may have been beaten up by Curt, but he's not a wimp or willing cuckold and this isn't the end. Please either finish the story and/or put a cuckold warning at the top. Your half story really leaves a lot to be desired.

Better you stay with "Sci-Fi & Fantasy"...1* (where are te REAL negative ratings when we need them?)

I think you should have made this into a dream sequence of a larger story. It’s soo over the top and plays into insecurities so much that it doesn’t even seem erotic at all. Just saying...

@MrHackerMan,

When will we see this draft from Juliet?

What a Chad!

It was not a bad story....it was terrible! *

Loved the concept!

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