All Comments on 'Breeding Season'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
In my honest opinion

This reads like a first draft as opposed to a finished story. There is a story here, yes, but it could use more development.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice one

I'm so up for repopulation fucking if it ever was necessary

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More of this story

Hope you will add more chapters please

wish_thinkerwish_thinkerabout 3 years ago

Is there a reason for the weird ending?

Evil_MonarchEvil_Monarchover 2 years ago

the part where she said she had sex with other guys was unnecessary. to me, it was a turnoff

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yuck.

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