All Comments on 'Breeding the GameMaster'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Incredible story, love the power dynamic. Not sure where the story could go from here, but would definitely read a continuation, or other story in the same vein.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Don’t like the end where he is a fucking deadbeat. It really doesn’t matter if she doesn’t want help. A man that won’t help in his child’s life is a deadbeat loser. Ruined the whole story with that ending.

Oli72Oli72almost 2 years ago

Would have been better if you'd left out the IUD issue. This is simply not how they work - and if it were, she'd be on track for a fallopian pregnancy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

i loved this- thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. Close enough to accurate If not fully accurate sex dynamics. (I say this because 80% of stories on here are simps that somehow back into sex with dimes. Not enough stories portray how simps are regarded even if this is exaggerated.) Impregnation. What's not to like.

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