All Comments on 'Breeze'

A no-nonsense straight the point story which I enjoyed reading. It set the scene very nicely for what could be interesting sequels... maybe the apprentice adds extras to the basic blow jobs etc. Maybe some of the wives find out and instead of running them out of town decide to make use of their obvious oral talents.

Pete.

I love this. It is refreshingly different. The language is so good, nothing excessive, it's to the point and builds wonderful pictures. The plot is great, unusual, plausible, humorous, it's the best story I've read in ages. Thank you so much. I've favourited it, I want more.