All Comments on 'Brian and Aunt Em Ch. 02'

by Jena121

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kplusmckplusmcover 11 years ago
excellent

as always great

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
Really hot and erotic

Auntie Em could wind up with having another baby by Brian, and it would make a close knit family when Em's daugher returned home.

A good chapter

Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Great story can't wait to see another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Keep strokin'

No buildup whatsoever. Just another teenage stroke story. Try again with believable characters and some development of the plot.

William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
Seems to me

the chances are pretty good that Aunt Em might soon deliver her fourth child by a fourth father.

Let's see now, Brian will be that baby's father and also it's cousin. Is that right?

Then when he gets Aunt Ems daughter--who is his cousin --pregnant, as he surely will, things really get complicated.

Aw hell, Jena just write it up and we'll sort it out later.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
auntiefuck

It's SO EXCITNG to read fuck stories between aunties and nephews!It's something great,especially if u really lived this experience with your mature blood aunt,after having have fantasy on her since your teenage years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Do I detect a ghost writer?

The "voice" of the narrative has changed. It has become more rushed and mechanical. Still finding nasty erotic plot ideas but quite poorly edited if at all. Now the sexy mature lady voice has become generic stroke porn too.

Alas!

Lucky3Lucky3over 7 years ago
Will be reading more.....

Such a horny lady a young mans fantasy!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow!

Why four years between Chapters 1 and 2?

steve437steve437over 1 year ago

Yummy breastfeeding story. Love that she got pregnant again by her nephew - so hot!

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