All Comments on 'Brian: Consoling My Aunt'
by Cassper
- 16 Comments
Anonymousabout 5 years agoHi ! Some readers are very picky and quirky about grammar, spelling, etc. This seems strange to me as this is an erotic story site and not Reader's Digest !
Your story was about spontaneous expressions of lust, desire, rejection and taking advantage of an opportunity. I liked it and looking forward to your next story !
Frankie1952about 5 years agoGreat read for your very first story. I hope you keep going with this one though. Seems like auntie might be lots of fun.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoPart 2 mom catches him doing aunts ass and likes what she sees
Alwaystabooabout 5 years agoNot in the have her join in, although that would be nice. More in the honest and uninhabited way. We love each other and are very attracted to each other so we express ourselves in the most natural way.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI stopped reading after the first line. Perhaps it is my loss but I found it exceedingly juvenile.
freetheabout 5 years agoI have also recently published my first story.
Don't be discouraged unfavorable comments. I think you have a nice way of making your characters 'talk'. Keep it up.
63SSRagtopabout 5 years agoHot story, your mom catches you two fucking, she thinks you don’t notice as she plays with herself but you see her in a reflection Or in a doorway touching herself then you have her as well
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI was 25 and in my third year of medical school when his wife left him for a rich man. I often helped clean his house and one afternoon magic happened. We fucked for hours, until I was too sore to continue. It lasted three years and no one ever knew of our shared passion. I finished medical school, a residency, and then got married. It was glorious while it lasted.
UltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years agoHope you continue with this.
You need to proof read a bit slower and try to catch the little, or not so little, errors.
Being a short story you could not have any depth to your characters, or a more natural involved progession to the fucking. These things are good for odd people like me who generally enjoy reading about more than a fuck. Don't get me wrong, there is nothing wrong with a good fuck.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoWherever you are Cassper, I hope you come back to continue/finish this story.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoCasper, if you read this, please complete this!
