by Alicemoon
Beautifully highlights the uncertainty and hesitation that can occur, even when people are extremely attracted to each other. Well captured.
Them finding each other and being able to stay together was great.
i just experienced the story...still catching my breath...still trembling...still feeling little aftershocks
I loved how the whole story seemed to steel the reader for a "ships in the night" kind of ending, but then hope and butterflies instead! I hope you write a sequel :)
I love this story so much. Whether it happened, sort-of-happened, or never happened, I want to believe it happened. The emotional intimacy, the roles shifting. Something about Ji-Yeon seeming the one who is in control and has this all calculated initially, but once it becomes real, Alice is the one who is more secure and more experienced.
I second the request for a sequel.
Your writing is so descriptive, I was there for it all, bemusement, fear, disgust, total arousal, that exquisite moment of consent. Beautiful.
Please, please, please do a follow up.
Oh and I am learning how to write myself by reading your stories.