All Comments on 'Bridge with the Stauntons Ch. 03'
by shaunreagh
- 35 Comments
Anonymousover 16 years agothe way you describe such complex actions (i.e. the exact position sophie is in when sitting on Staunton's lap) makes it as if i am right there and i can actually see the action happening. good one
SweetLittleLiarover 16 years agoShaun, what incredible genius you have for exploring these dark desires. You perfectly capture those paralyzingly conflicting emotions -- wanting it and not wanting it, knowing you shouldn't, knowing it's wrong, but unable to stop it, unable to resist, helpless and captive to that intense pleasure. This is by far the best of the three Staunton pieces, amazingly erotic, meltingly hot. It's delicious.
melsdadover 16 years agoI've just read all three stories, I'm exhausted but in the most incredible way. Thank you, what a great piece of work.
Anonymousover 16 years agoSeaun you have written a story that is so sensual, and you place the reader in the mind of the person who is "victimized' but NO, enjoying their dilemma....soo hot!
Anonymousabout 16 years agoJudy's mental commentary as it conflicts with her morality is superb. How will she manage to reconcile her marriage with Staunton's ever expanding ownership of her and Sophie? Will her husband be aware of these events and become a helpless pawn in the hands of mr and mrs Staunton?
So many unanswered questions and so many avenues to explore. I am thoroughly convinced your superb writing will continue to enthrall us all.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoVery erotic--the slow exercise of power, taking the reluctant women step by step until they did not want to resist and he got what he wanted.
MagicJ_001almost 14 years agoThanks for the great story. Would like to read more like it. Your character's slow descent into an orgasm was superb.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThe truth of the matter is that people can discover a side of themselves they were not aware of before; maybe it was just latent, and then pop...
Your craft is extremely good. Are you sure you are not teaching Creative Writing somewhere in say British Columbia or California?
Are you a man or a woman? Your imagination sticks out regardless.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThis series is the best you have written. The characters are so real and the sexual tension high. Please write a fourth in the series, there is so much material still to cover, both with Staunton, and Sophie.
Anonymousover 7 years agoThere has to be more of this story
Whether bridge is played or not
Whether the Chairman is involved or the Investor or perhaps just Paula
And will her husband ever realize
How much his wife helps in his career and how much she enjoys it
Even when she hates it
loveable_guyover 6 years agoJudy did all the sex, with another man, while studying the secrets of the universe? Marriage, her house, who she was, trying to ignore that her husbands cock was buried in her cunt?
Why is the author afraid of saying fuck, or cock, or cunt?
fishgetterabout 5 years agoYou have here the beginning of a long 'novel', with many more volumes. Please, finish more, please. Thanks in advance.
Anonymousover 3 years agoIn my book Brian's wife has been a keeper ever since I read Ch. 1.
I think that, emotionally, Brian is a late bloomer. Luckily for him, when he was born, it was written in the stars that he would marry a both sexy & supportive woman who will bring him love, & passion, & prosperity, & would be ready to anything to help her husband..
Sophie is a very complex character. It seems to me that she has the beauty, the health, the style, the manners... Her main problem is her low self-esteem.
Thank you for this chapter.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoInstead of writing my own comment I am copy pasting anon comment posted 9 monts before this one.
Quote: ❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆+ (5.25/5=105%, i.e. "A+ above expectatoons")! The storyline was very imaginatively conceived & brilliantly crafted.
In my book Brian's wife has been a keeper ever since I read Ch. 1.
I think that, emotionally, Brian is a late bloomer. Luckily for him, when he was born, it was written in the stars that he would marry a both sexy & supportive woman who will bring him love, & passion, & prosperity, & would be ready to [do] anything to help her husband..
Sophie is a very complex character. It seems to me that she has the beauty, the health, the style, the manners... Her main problem is her low self-esteem.
Thank you for this chapter. Unquote.
❤💚❤💚❤+ (5+)!
Anonymousover 2 years agoI loved Ch. 3, gave it a 5 (⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐).
Please note that the story tags fail to indicate that there is this some FF action in this chapter.
Excerpt from the story follows:
"The two of us, together, had beaten the odds. Derived some enjoyment for ourselves in the orgy of enjoyment intended for others."
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